
Volume
36.2
Summer 2005
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book
review:
Danger
on Peaks, Poems
by Gary Snyder

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Reviewed
by Jerry Kilbride
Danger
on Peaks, Poems by Gary Snyder. Washington,
D.C.: Shoemaker & Hoard, Publishers, 2004. ISBN
1-59376-041-8. 128 pages, cloth. 5 3/½ x 81/½, hardbound.
US$22.00 in the U.S., Can$30.95 in Canada, from
booksellers.
It
has been almost 50 years since the publication of
Jack Kerouacs Dharma Bums, a book in
which Japhy Ryder (Gary Snyder) strode across a
meadow on the eastern slope of the Sierras and added
a new word to most of our vocabularies: haiku. First
time that anyone in my milieu back at the Art Institute
of Chicago had heard of it. In those days of our
resistance to the Eisenhower Administrations
messages of complacency and conformity, my friends
and I were more than willing to let the new Japanese
word roll around on our tongues as we simultaneously
struggled to remove the braces from our brains.
In addition to the Beats, we were profoundly influenced
by writers such as Camus, Hesse, and Mishima and
avant-garde painters then working in Chicago and
on both coasts. There was an excitement of new possibilities
in the air as we listened to the Weavers songs
of labor and protest and to the buzz-saw voice of
Malvina Reynolds warn us about the dangers of living
in little houses made of ticky-tacky.
So,
you are about to ask, whats all this got to
do with a review of Gary Snyders new book,
Danger on Peaks ? Hasnt that kid who
clued us in about haiku come a long way since the
1950s: books of poetry, honors, prizes?
Exactly,
and yet he seems to be a writer, at age 75, still
anchored in youthful enthusiasms, and whose work
has remained fresh and welcoming. Age may now becoming
a factor, but, what the heck, thats not going
to slow Snyder down, so lets open the book
and join him in the section titled Glacier Ghoststanka
and what might be called haiku:
Clumsy
at first
my legs, feet, and eye learn
again to leap
skip
through the jumbled rocks
and
(here he may be thinking of his own mortality)
ice-scrape-ponds,
scraggly pines
long views, flower mud marches
so many places
for a wandering boulder to settle
forever
The
poem Really the Real takes us on a further
journey of discovery in the company of Snyder and
Ko Un, a visiting poet from Korea. We are driven
past the flooded fields of Californias Central
Valley searching out sand hill cranes. A stop is
made for a meal in the old and historic Chinese
town of Locke before pressing on. Out and
down to Walnut Grove til we find road
J-11 going eastSnyder gives accurate
directions as if hoping we will follow and fully
share in a new experience. Then, suddenly, a Jackson
Pollock-like explosion of birds crosses the sky,
which Snyder instantly and fiercely grasps and puts
into words (Ko Un must have really been impressed):
in
threes, twos, fives from all directions,
circling, counter-spinning, higher and lower,
big silver bodies, long necks, dab of red on the
head,
chaotic, leaderless, harmonic, playfulwhat
are they doing?
Splendidly nowhere thousands
And
back to Davis, forty miles, forty minutes
shivering to remember whats
going on
just a few miles west of the 5
in the wetlands, in the ongoing elder what
you might call.
really the real, world.
In
Summer of 97, after asking the
earth spirit for permission, he and his friends
revel in the accomplishment of building an addition
to his house, which was done for the love of his
wife, Carole Koda. He recognizesin this nice
little slice of life!the contributions of
each individual and is thoughtful enough to name
everyone involved in the project:
Chuck
for plumbering
David drywalling,
staining,
crawling ;
Stu for drain rock
Kurt for hot wire
Gary for cold beer
Carole for brave laugh
til
she leaves,
crew
greaves
Oak and Pine looking on
Old Kitkitdizze house now
Has another wing
So
well pour a glass and sing
This has been fun as heaven
Summer of ninety-seven
The
opening section of the book, Mount St. Helens, documents
his relationship with the volcano that the Sahaptin
Indians called Loowit. He first visited Spirit Lake
when he was thirteen, and two years later, after
asking the mountain for help, he climbed to the
summit on Aug. 13, 1945. Descending to Spirit Lake
Lodge, Snyder reads that 150,000 have died at Hiroshima
and vows to fight the destructive power of the atomic
bomb. Years later, following ten years of living
in Japan, he returns after the top of the mountain
has been blown apart. Viewing fields of prone
logs laid by the blast, he thinks of Siddhartha
on the night he left his home for good and of his
guests sleeping off a frenzy of dancing angelic
boys and girls, sleeping it off. (A curious
cosmic connection between vastly different manifestations
of nature.)
The
least satisfying section of the book is titled Dust
in the Wind, which contains several of the poets
rather unsuccessful attempts at haibun (or what
the dust jacket blurb refers to as haibun). This
ancient Japanese literary art form has been embraced
in the last few decades by haiku poets worldwide
and harks back to the granddaddy of all haibun:
Matsuo Bashôs great 17th century travel
journal titled Oku no hosomichi (several
good English translations are now in print). The
formlong or shortconsists of prose interspersed
with haiku: an intellectual and emotional juxtaposition
of prose and poetry, so to speak. Obviously, there
is a lot of interesting experimentation going on
with some highly successful results. Snyder, alas,
rather that taking an imaginative leap into the
standard three-line haiku after a prose paragraph,
adds, in most cases, several lines of longer poetry.
This approach seems flat, lacks resonance, and is
heavy with the weight of too much information. That
said, there are paragraphs in Cormorants
that I find stunningly beautiful. The poet likens
the threads and dribbles of bird-white
flowing down rock ledges to
the white writings of Mark Tobey. He
adds, Each bird-scholar has its own stone
chair and the long full streaks below. Some rocks
are unoccupied, unwritten. After I read these
visually evocative lines, it seems that an impression
of calligraphic images is left on the surface of
my eyes. There is a spiritual correlation here between
the written word and the graphic arts: Snyders
Zen Buddhism and Tobeys being long-grounded
in the Bahai Faithspiritual and artistic
forms mirrored into each other. (For those unfamiliar
with Tobeys work, let me recommend Arthur
L. Dahls Mark Tobey: Art and Belief. )
Going
all the way back to Riprap & Cold Mountain
Poems, its always been life-enhancing
going along with Gary Snyder on his journeys. Its
all been more than worth it ! So, I obviously recommend
this book its one to which Ill
return and reread in its entirety in the future.
I feel it appropriate to end this review with a
poem Gary Snyder has written for his wife, to whom
he has lovingly dedicated this book.
FOR
CAROLE
I
first saw her in the zendo
at meal time unwrapping bowls
head forward holding back the cloth
as
server I was kneeling
to fill three sets of bowls each time
up the line
Her lithe leg
proud, skeptical,
passionate, trained
by the
heights by the
danger on peaks
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