
Volume
36.1
Spring 2005
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book
review:
A
New Moon
by Bruce H. Feingold

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reviewed
by Rich Youmans
A
New Moon, by Bruce H. Feingold; illustrations
by Eona (Winchester, Va.: Red Moon Press, 2004).
78 pages, 8.5 ½ x 5 ½, paperback, perfectbound.
ISBN 1-893959-43-0. $12.00 + $4.00 shipping and
handling from the publisher at PO Box 2461, Winchester,
VA 22604-1661
In
A Brief Explanation of Haiku for Non-Haiku
Readers & Friends, the concluding essay
of his book, A New Moon, Bruce H. Feingold
writes,
If
these haiku and senryu help you feel deeply about
yourself, others, and the natural world, and if
you experience beauty and truths that otherwise
you might overlook in your daily life, Ill
be satisfied that my poems have been successful.
The
ninety-nine poems that attempt this goal are divided
into six sections: Alone, which offers
varied observations about nature, the author himself,
and other individuals; Family & Friends,
the title of which is self-explana-tory; Berkeley
and Maui, two sections dealing with
specic locales; A Faintly Smiling Buddha,
which focuses on a friends death from cancer;
and White Clouds Floating By, which
seems to contain primarily nature haiku, although
this section also contains two poignant memorial
haiku for the late Bob Spiess. Interspersed throughout
are pen and ink drawings by Eona, an illustrator
who lives in Maui.
The
collection contains several fine poems, especially
among the senryu:
lecture
on ego
the Zen professor
tapes himself
unspoiled
beach
a beatific blond applies
red toe nail polish
yoga
unfolding
my mind
Yet
the poems that best accomplish Feingolds stated
goal are those that com-bine the authors apparent
good humor, his joy in his family, and his apprecia-tion
for natural beauty with the poignancy and pain that
can be just as much a part of life. For example,
compare two haikuone from Maui,
one from the grittier Berkeley that
each contain a rainbow:
a
rainbow sparkles
over the roadside fruit stand :
Leave Money In Box
rainswept
streets
homeless trumpeters wail,
Over the Rainbow
I
like both haiku, but the second contains more layers
of emotion, and re-mains with me longer. The same
holds true for those haiku comprising Family
& Friends. This section amply displays
Feingolds joy in those close to him, particularly
his wife and children. Some of the moments, however,
seem more cute than memorable:
shadowy
forest
around every twist and turn,
my wife shouts, Bear ! Bear !
tumbling
over
the edge of the bed, shouting,
ninja turtles
The
last poem in the section reaches beyond simple joy
in family life, however:
our
will
in the deepest reaches of
the file cabinet
With
such haiku, Feingold should be satisfied that his
mission has been accomplished.
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